Correct spelling and grammar throughout

This patch addresses the issues with my previous patch submission here:
https://mailman.archlinux.org/pipermail/arch-projects/2012-June/002990.html

The notable changes between this patch and the previous one are below:
-- this patch does not rename set_timezone()
-- 'filesystems' and 'bash' are left as-is
-- everything is in one patch, not two
-- the 'makedepends' change is no longer relevant because the duplication
of it was already removed in a later commit

Regarding the capitalization of "Btrfs", it seems that upstream prefers
"Btrfs".[1][2]

Regarding 'https://' vs. 'http://', I left this change in the patch
because stating 'https://www.archlinux.org' in the start-up messages
doesn't force anyone to use HTTPS over HTTP. It simply shows that HTTPS
is available for use. If someone really doesn't want to use HTTPS, they
don't have to. Finally, Dan McGee stated that HTTPS will be used all the
time soon.[3]

[1] https://oss.oracle.com/projects/btrfs/
[2] https://btrfs.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Main_Page
[3] https://bugs.archlinux.org/task/30486#comment96222

Signed-off-by: Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu>

1 files changed, 23 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/rc.sysinit b/rc.sysinit
index 1106503..2d7df3e 100755
--- a/rc.sysinit
+++ b/rc.sysinit
@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@ fi
 
 echo " "
 printhl "Arch Linux\n"
-printhl "${C_H2}http://www.archlinux.org"
+printhl "${C_H2}https://www.archlinux.org"
 printsep
 
-# mount the api filesystems
+# mount the API filesystems
 # /proc, /sys, /run, /dev, /run/lock, /dev/pts, /dev/shm
 mountpoint -q /proc    || mount -t proc proc /proc -o nosuid,noexec,nodev
 mountpoint -q /sys     || mount -t sysfs sys /sys -o nosuid,noexec,nodev
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if [[ ! -e /run/initramfs/root-fsck ]]; then
 	# remount root ro to allow for fsck later on, we remount now to
 	# make sure nothing can open files rw on root which would block a remount
 	findmnt / --options ro &>/dev/null ||
-		status "Mounting Root Read-Only" mount -o remount,ro /
+		status "Mounting root read-only" mount -o remount,ro /
 fi
 
 run_hook sysinit_start
@@ -48,26 +48,26 @@ case $HARDWARECLOCK in
 esac
 
 if [[ $HWCLOCK_PARAMS ]]; then
-	stat_busy "Adjusting system time and setting kernel timezone"
+	stat_busy "Adjusting system time and setting kernel time zone"
 
-		# Adjust the system time for timezone offset if rtc is not in UTC
+		# Adjust the system time for time zone offset if rtc is not in UTC
 		# 1. Make creation time on device nodes sane (FS#8665)
 		# 2. Filesystem checks can depend on system time
 		# 3. This also sets the kernel time zone, used by e.g. vfat
-		# If TIMEZONE is not set in rc.conf, the timezone stored in /etc/localtime
-		# is used. If HARDWARECLOCK is not set in rc.conf, the value in
-		# /var/lib/hwclock/adjfile is used (in this case /var can not be a separate
+		# If TIMEZONE is not set in /etc/rc.conf, the time zone stored in /etc/localtime
+		# is used. If HARDWARECLOCK is not set in /etc/rc.conf, the value in
+		# /var/lib/hwclock/adjfile is used (in this case, /var cannot be a separate
 		# partition).
 	[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && export TZ=$TIMEZONE
 	hwclock $HWCLOCK_PARAMS && stat_done || stat_fail
 	unset TZ
 fi
 
-# Start/trigger UDev, load MODULES and settle UDev
+# Start/trigger udev, load MODULES, and settle udev
 udevd_modprobe sysinit
 
 # this must be done after udev has loaded the KMS modules
-status 'Configuring Virtual Consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
+status 'Configuring virtual consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
 
 # bring up the loopback interface
 [[ -d /sys/class/net/lo ]] &&
@@ -77,11 +77,11 @@ status 'Configuring Virtual Consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
 [[ $USEDMRAID = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P dmraid) ]] &&
 	status "Activating FakeRAID arrays" dmraid -i -ay
 
-# BTRFS devices detection
+# Btrfs devices detection
 [[ $USEBTRFS = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P btrfs) ]] &&
-	status "Activating BTRFS volumes" btrfs device scan
+	status "Activating Btrfs volumes" btrfs device scan
 
-# Activate LVM2 groups if any
+# Activate LVM2 groups, if any
 activate_vgs
 
 # Set up non-root encrypted partition mappings
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ fi
 # Check filesystems
 run_hook sysinit_prefsck
 if [[ -x $(type -P fsck) ]]; then
-	stat_busy "Checking Filesystems"
+	stat_busy "Checking filesystems"
 		fsck_all >|"${FSCK_OUT:-/dev/stdout}" 2>|"${FSCK_ERR:-/dev/stdout}"
 	declare -r fsckret=$?
 	(( fsckret <= 1 )) && stat_done || stat_fail
@@ -108,25 +108,25 @@ run_hook sysinit_postfsck
 # Single-user login and/or automatic reboot if needed
 fsck_reboot $fsckret
 
-status "Remounting Root and API filesystems" \
+status "Remounting root and API filesystems" \
 	/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-remount-fs
 
-# now mount all the local filesystems
+# Now mount all the local filesystems
 run_hook sysinit_premount
-status "Mounting Local Filesystems" \
+status "Mounting local filesystems" \
 	mount_all
 run_hook sysinit_postmount
 
-# enable monitoring of lvm2 groups, now that the filesystems are mounted rw
+# Enable monitoring of LVM2 groups, now that the filesystems are mounted rw
 [[ $USELVM = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P lvm) && -d /sys/block ]] &&
 	status "Activating monitoring of LVM2 groups" \
 		vgchange --monitor y >/dev/null
 
-status "Activating Swap" swapon -a
+status "Activating swap" swapon -a
 
-[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring Time Zone" set_timezone "$TIMEZONE"
+[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring time zone" set_timezone "$TIMEZONE"
 
-status 'Initializing Random Seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed load
+status 'Initializing random seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed load
 
 # Remove leftover files
 remove_leftover
@@ -135,11 +135,11 @@ if [[ -s /etc/hostname ]]; then
 	HOSTNAME=$(< /etc/hostname)
 fi
 if [[ $HOSTNAME ]]; then
-	stat_busy "Setting Hostname: $HOSTNAME"
+	stat_busy "Setting hostname: $HOSTNAME"
 	echo "$HOSTNAME" >| /proc/sys/kernel/hostname && stat_done || stat_fail
 fi
 
-stat_busy "Saving dmesg Log"
+stat_busy "Saving dmesg log"
 	if [[ -e /proc/sys/kernel/dmesg_restrict ]] &&
 		(( $(< /proc/sys/kernel/dmesg_restrict) == 1 )); then
 		install -Tm 0600 <( dmesg ) /var/log/dmesg.log